DON’T WALK! ACTION TIP FOR WRITERS:
By Elizabeth English
Writers should always try to avoid using the simple verb, “walk”, whenever possible! Why have your character just walk into a room, or across the road? It tells the reader almost nothing about the character’s current mood, personality, intent, feelings, or how he or she presents him- or herself, or how anyone might perceive or react to seeing the character. Here’s a chance to show the reader & the ultimate film-viewer more about the character, and to set up a sense of who this person is, and what to expect!
A character opens the door and walks in a room. Boring! Common! What if that character crawled in the window, instead? Or boogied in, maybe even stark naked? Or slinked in dressed in a bad-clown costume? A person in cowboy boots walks differently from a person in ballet slippers, or spike heels, or flip-flops, or is barefoot. Children, teenagers, men & women and seniors all move differently, too! Use everything you’ve got to tell the whole story!
A super-confident person may saunter or swagger or stroll across a room; a person with a lack of purpose may amble, mosey, shuffle or shamble in; a shy person may hesitantly tip-toe in; an angry person may march or clomp across the room; a person with ill-intent may sneak, stalk or stomp along the street, a sad or discouraged character may shuffle past, an older or wounded person may hobble, totter, limp or stumble, and so on. Use your options, and get out that Thesaurus to help characterize the actions and reactions in your story!
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2014 MOONDANCERS MADE A BIG SPLASH!
>>>>>>>>> MOONDANCE 2014 PHOTOS ARE HERE: <<<<<<<<<
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Congratulations, 2014 Moondance Winners!
All of the exceptionally talented & creative 2014 Moondance winners are to be congratulated on their wonderful projects submitted to the film festival. Bravo & brava! Applause & big hugs all around! You will find that doors will open for you as a Moondance winner. Please let us know of your successes!
• TO SEE THE WINNERS LIST, GO HERE.
• TO SEE WHAT EACH OF THE AWARD CATEGORIES MEAN, GO HERE.
• TO SEE THE LIST OF AUDIENCE FAVORITE FILMS, GO HERE.
• If you were unable to attend the gala event, networking with people from the US & around the world, and want to receive your Moondance star award & official certificate, please GO HERE FOR THE ORDER FORM.The award & certificate are free, only the postage to mail it to you is needed. This offer expires on November 30, 2014.
• THE 2014 MOONDANCE LAURELS for finalists, winners, selected films & audience favorite films are HERE. […]
2014 MOONDANCE’S VERY SPECIAL GUEST
Read the exclusive interview & article with the “Breaking Bad” co-star on the front page of the Boulder Daily Camera newspaper’s Entertainment section: http://www.dailycamera.com/Entertainment/ci_26569088/Breaking-Bad-villain-headlines-Boulders-Moondance-International-Film-Festival
Giancarlo Esposito, multi-award-winning actor, has graciously offered to conduct 3 private, one-on-one consultations, one each day at Moondance, to actors who are very serious about pursuing their craft in film, television & stage, and who will have work prepared to review, critique and finesse so that he would have the ability to give you some valuable direction and insider tips. Half-hour consultations are $500, and full one-hour consultations are $1000, available only at the box office during the festival. Please see festival director, Elizabeth English, to review your credits for potential selection of those 3 lucky actors who will be selected for this very exclusive consultation opportunity! […]
WELCOME TO THE 2014
MOONDANCE INTERNATIONAL FILM FESTIVAL!
September 26, 27, 28
Beautiful Boulder, Colorado USA […]
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THANKS FOR YOUR INTEREST IN THE MOONDANCE INTERNATIONAL FILM FESTIVAL!
Congratulations to all our talented filmmakers!
2014 LIST OF SELECTED FILM TITLES! […]
Desperately seeking the 2014 list of finalists? Just click this link:
If you’re a finalist for 2014, you can find & download the finalist laurels here:
We sincerely apologize for the glitch with the finalist & laurels links in the most recent news-blog,
but we think some blog gremlins must have been playing around in the background!
We offered them free film tickets & buttered popcorn, and all’s well now!
Technology is great – when it works, right?
September 26-28, 2014 • Boulder, Colorado USA
Congratulations, 2014 Moondance finalists!
Thanks a million for all the wonderful submissions again this season!
SEE THE FINALISTS LISTINGS HERE!
Moondance 2014 winners in all categories will be announced & awards presented, at the 15th annual gala Oscar’s-style awards ceremony & reception, September 28th, to be held in a lovely, Victorian mansion & garden, with a sumptuous array of gourmet, all-natural buffet of hors d’oeuvres & desserts, Colorado wines & beers, cocktails, and live music in the gazebo! A special award will be presented to our celebrity guest, Giancarlo Esposito, co-star of AMC’s “Breaking Bad” and NBC’s “Revolution”!
2014 Moondance laurels for finalists can be downloaded HERE!
Selected films for screening at the festival will be announced soon. Please note: Not all film finalists were selected for screenings.
ORDER YOUR MOONDANCE FILM FESTIVAL TICKETS NOW! […]
IN THIS NEWS-BLOG:
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- EVENTS AT THE 15th ANNUAL MOONDANCE!
- “BREAKING BAD” STAR TO APPEAR AT MOONDANCE!
- CREATIVE WRITING FOR AUDIO DRAMA!
- THE ART OF STORYTELLING!
- MOONDANCERS WRITE US!
- MOONDANCE RECOMMENDS!
- SOME THINGS TO THINK ABOUT!
EVENTS AT THE 2014 MOONDANCE FILM FESTIVAL: […]
We look forward to seeing you here, and to many amazing, productive and entertaining opportunities for us all!
September 26, 27, 28, in beautiful Boulder, Colorado, USA